Good But Not That

November 6, 2013Dreams, Inspiration, Poetry, WritingPoetry, Relationships, writingTerah Van Dusen

I’ve never been
more on track
Not that there
are roses blooming
in my eyes
Not that this love
runs clear like water
Not that I won’t
pull my hair out
tomorrow
Not that I am
unwilling to be
my own lover

7 thoughts on “Good But Not That”

Peter Wells aka Countingducks says:

November 6, 2013 at 6:46 am

I loved the last verse. “Not that I am unwilling to be my own lover”. I suppose admiration may start at home, and some secrets are best confided to a mirror. Your words are always thought provoking, and you may have noticed I enjoy that

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1. Terah Van Dusen says:
  
  November 12, 2013 at 1:17 am
  
  I really appreciate you taking the time to read, understand, and appreciate my words and thoughts.
  
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leamuse says:

November 6, 2013 at 11:10 pm

As always Terah, you are right on target and I love how you shake things up! 🙂

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1. Terah Van Dusen says:
  
  November 12, 2013 at 1:15 am
  
  Thank you Leamuse!! 🙂
  
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  1. leamuse says:
    
    November 12, 2013 at 2:14 am
    
    🙂
StarlitReveries says:

December 16, 2013 at 4:29 pm

Awesome! So real, what a refreshing read!

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1. Terah Van Dusen says:
  
  December 19, 2013 at 3:02 am
  
  Thank you SO much. Really.
  
  Reply

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